Aloha Nolene, et.al.

Helen Streck has a good presentation & slides on "Effective
Communication" which addresses some of the "dos & don'ts".  Helen also
recommended the book, "Send", which also discusses the proper use of
emails and communications...

Have a great weekend!

Brian 


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From: Records Management Program [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
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Sent: Thursday, June 21, 2007 4:47 PM
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Subject: Writing for the Record

I am developing some really basic RIM training targeted to every
employee. I want to include a bit about how to properly write documents
(and emails) for business in general and especially for those that will
be kept as a record. While making everyone take a basic Business English
class would be ideal, I doubt that'll happen any time soon. I just want
something punchy -- a Do's and Don'ts list perhaps. I have the ARMA
Records @Work pamphlet for some ideas, but was wondering if you folks
have something you've used.
 
Nolene
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